LOVIATHAN
by Mike Cavallaro
CHAPTER
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13 comments + 12 replies
Posted by: Llyn Hunter
01:18pm / May 14, 2008
01:18pm / May 14, 2008
That's great! I like the foreshadowing of the drawing on the last page, but I wasn't expecting the doorway being the mouth of the monster. Very good allusion and very cool reveal.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
01:32am / May 15, 2008
01:32am / May 15, 2008
Thanks!
What kind of music does this kid listen to???
What kind of music does this kid listen to???
Posted by: lovelace
01:33pm / May 14, 2008
01:33pm / May 14, 2008
Great simple stark design. Sweet spotted blacks. Cool story. I'm hooked.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
01:33am / May 15, 2008
01:33am / May 15, 2008
Yes, trying to calm down the line work after the crazy opening sequence. A little bit o' normal before ... well, you'll see...
Posted by: Bill
03:13pm / May 14, 2008
03:13pm / May 14, 2008
That he had drawn on the wall was very unexpected and very cool.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
01:34am / May 15, 2008
01:34am / May 15, 2008
I never know what these characters are going to do.
Posted by: Steven Fuentes
05:21pm / May 14, 2008
05:21pm / May 14, 2008
Because of the comment on the last page, I keep thinking of him as Ed Asner and laughing. anyway, great set of pages. Something about the jump from page 9-10 is kind of abrupt to me, I don't know exactly what but I was kinda taken aback.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
01:36am / May 15, 2008
01:36am / May 15, 2008
You should sit down for a moment. Do you want some water or something?
Posted by: jane
08:41pm / May 14, 2008
08:41pm / May 14, 2008
AAAAAHHHCRAZY KID WITH A MARKER!!!!!!! RUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!!
This is awesome! Such a simple story with such complex possibilities........mmuuahahhaaaa,
i loveit.
This is awesome! Such a simple story with such complex possibilities........mmuuahahhaaaa,
i loveit.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
01:39am / May 15, 2008
01:39am / May 15, 2008
Yes, next issue it's mustaches for everyone not smart enough to flee!
Look for further complications to our story ...
as soon as I think of some ...
Look for further complications to our story ...
as soon as I think of some ...
Posted by: Jim H.
08:50pm / May 14, 2008
08:50pm / May 14, 2008
Artistic types are always guided by demonic forces! Glad we got that straight. ;-)
Posted by: Dan Goldman
12:59am / May 16, 2008
12:59am / May 16, 2008
i'm not even remotely into this genre/period of comics you're nodding wildly to, but you've already eclipsed them with your dialogue and creative reveals. this is far more than just Silver Age homage, putting you firmly in Darwyn Cooke's territory... in 11 pages. Kudos, sensei.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
01:00am / May 16, 2008
01:00am / May 16, 2008
Having met Darwin Cooke a couple times now, that "territory" would have to be the nearest bar.
No, seriously, I'm not deserving of such high praise, but it's great to know there's some appeal here for those not normally into this sort of thing.
No, seriously, I'm not deserving of such high praise, but it's great to know there's some appeal here for those not normally into this sort of thing.
Posted by: Alexis
11:16pm / Jun 19, 2008
11:16pm / Jun 19, 2008
What a great, creepy page! ("Creepy" is one of my highest compliments.) I'm officially hooked on this, and Activate in general. Joe tells me I should check out Parade (with Fireworks) and I will. Good work, paisan!
11:41am / May 14, 2008