LOVIATHAN
by Mike Cavallaro
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Posted by: Tim Hamilton
08:10am / May 7, 2008
Very mysterious!
Reminds me of a toth comic.

Charlie's up to something isn't he!?


Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
08:32pm / May 7, 2008
Maybe.
Posted by: Lalato
08:43am / May 7, 2008
Charlie is creepy. I think he has a peephole.

--sam
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
08:33pm / May 7, 2008
I thought everyone had a ...

wait ...
Posted by: Steven Fuentes
10:18am / May 7, 2008
Bah, Charlie just seems like a nice guy. This page is great, the inking is very clean and precise. I always love when reading a superhero comic, the pages where there are no superheroes and just the ordinary people. Somehow that is the most interesting part to me.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
08:34pm / May 7, 2008
There's nothing ordinary about people.
Posted by: Simon Fraser
11:26am / May 7, 2008
Fraser?


Apart from some confusing lettering placement, looks good.

I'm happy to see something normal happen in this story!!!
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
08:35pm / May 7, 2008
Fraser, get to Dr. Barnett's office NOW.

That's the last time I'm going to tell you.
Posted by: Fiffe
11:35am / May 7, 2008
Like that last panel, but it's your Romita girl that I dig.

Last I checked, word balloon tails lead one balloon to another. There's nothing odd about your placement. Yer a regular Bruzenak, kid.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
08:37pm / May 7, 2008
I hate it when my placement is odd. It makes my Bruzenak all irregular.
Posted by: Dean Haspiel
11:51am / May 7, 2008
Love the transition between the face in the sea and the face in the coffee. Love the chatter between Dr. Barnett and Charlie. Her mind is clearly occupied while he makes small talk [in hopes for pillow talk?]. Lots of interesting stuff to chew on at her job. Her job? What IS her job? Mystery!

Everything connects.
Posted by: Steven Fuentes
01:24pm / May 7, 2008
Duh, she's "Project Director".
Posted by: Dean Haspiel
01:27pm / May 7, 2008
Project Director of WHAT???
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
01:37pm / May 7, 2008
of the PROJECT! DUH!!!
Posted by: Dean Haspiel
01:38pm / May 7, 2008
"Project Duh?"

SO disappointing.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
08:38pm / May 7, 2008
"Duh" is just a code word.

You'll see.
Posted by: Pat!
01:23pm / May 7, 2008
i love how, even in the second panel, you can still see a "face" in her cup of coffee

really loving your art style here :)
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
08:39pm / May 7, 2008
Does the face stay in the coffee cup when you look away?
Posted by: Pat!
08:42pm / May 7, 2008
hmm, not sure.

i think i left it behind in a forest right before a tree fell ;)
Posted by: steve marino
04:54pm / May 7, 2008
Poor Charlie getting blown off...

Nice enough guy but he doesn't stand a chance.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
08:39pm / May 7, 2008
I know. What is he thinking?
Posted by: steve marino
08:17am / May 8, 2008
His "happy-go-lucky" expression is great!

I could be wrong, but it looks like he's out of his league...