I raced through this the first time to get caught up, but now that I've slowed down and re-read I'm totally hooked. This is some fine writing, which the drawing style matches perfectly.
I myself see many mistakes that I'm already fixing here and there. But that's what AIV is for sometimes. One can go back and tighten up or correct the errors.
Yes, I think back when I posted this, I didn't yet grasp how to make new chapters on this site. Thus, Chapter one is "Two" chapters. Thanks for reading. I have taken a longish break as you can see as I am reading through this story and editing it a bit. Both to fix word balloons and editing some un needed fat. Thanks for reading though! Sorry to hold up the story for those who have been regular readers.
09:23am / Jun 29, 2009