Thanks man. I've got a few short stories here and there coming up - a collab with Elizabeth Genco in the No Formula anthology from Desperado/Image and a short bit in an Asylum Press anthology, both in October.
Great end. Explains the whole comic as basically a retelling /flashback and clears up any mystery. Wonder what their sentence was, though... Will there be a foreward or afterward in the printed version about the real case?
No additional material of that nature planned for the first edition, but there is an epilogue and ten deleted pages that exist in scipt form that I'm saving for a rainy day.
FYI, the guys all got life and the girl pled out on third degree murder and ended up with (I think) 17 years.
Posted by: Christopher Beckett 07:29am / Jun 22, 2008
Kevin,
Finally got around to finishing this. Brilliantly executed. The facial expressions, the use of color, and the way you utilized the comic page to create tension was really well done. It's good to see artists like you pushing the boundaries of comics, and creating works that can make people think. I'm glad I got a chance to profile early chapters at the Pulse and look forward to catching up with you at a future convention.
I stopped here at the very beginning of this. I didn't realize you were actually going through with the story in this in this fashion.
I expected some kind of fictional version of the story with the actual details masked in fiction. This hits too close to home for too many people already in anguish. People are not happy about this at all.
I consider this story a personal attack on my neighborhood, my home, and neighbors. Fishtown is very poorly represented here. If you were going to use the name of the neighborhood and the likenesses of those involved in this tragedy, you should have done more research and contacted the families personally. I consider your limited research and exploitation of this crime to be selfish and irresponsible.
You're not welcome in Fishtown, in spite of the fact that you will probably make a lot of money exploiting this tragedy and soiling the memory of Jason Sweeney. Don't ever come here. Good luck with your book.
Just read that all in one sitting. The violence, when it comes, is really, really disturbing. It's been a long time since a comic has made me feel that kind of shocked repulsion! But I really enjoyed it, as a whole it's very well-paced and the art really serves the story, not the other way round. I read that "Next-Door Neighbour" strip of yours on Smith-thought it was great-but now I wanna read more of your stuff! (As an aside-I don't suppose you've ever come across the work of Henry Flint? He's done a lot of stuff for 2000ad-but your style reminds me quite a bit of his-which is no bad thing!) So, thank you for giving us this brilliant strip-is it in print yet?
Kevin- I just found this today- read it all in one setting...great art style AND story-telling (far more literate than almost any main stream comic I can think of at the moment - The actual killing sequence reminded me of the "Chant of Jimmy Blacksmith" Ausie film where the main character finally snaps and walks in on an unsuspecting family in the Outback and casually kills them all... (Of course- Jimmy B. was driven to his act by enduring the racial scorn directed at Aboes over many years- These #%#%%^!! kids on the other hand didn't have any kind of moral excuse to do what they did in your "noir-like" graphic novel...I don't know anything of the actual history of what this story alludes to- but you seem to have hit all the right keys here- The mean streets backgrounds added a lot - and the Emerson quote brought the ending right up there to what may very well be true literature....Well done ,Sir !!!!
This story was absolutely amazing. I'm not sure what more I can say because, I'm quite at a loss for words. That's how good it is. Thanks for the read. I can't wait to see what else you do!
I think 'gripping' is the perfect word for your book, since it felt more and more like a hand was squeezing my heart with every chapter of the story (awesome work ending almost all of them with chilling dialogue, 'and that was when we killed him' was just...*shudders*)
There's already haters and misunderstandings but you and fishtown are definitely worthy of the awards received, i hope your next book is just as intense :)
Excellent story and excellent choice for a story, in particularly since it is based on a true, and truly sadistic, murder. I am wondering tho why you put part five on...20 individual webpages?? ...that was actually annoying! Parts one thru four were all on their own individual webpages so, splicing up part five seems to serve no purpose and make no sense.
Also, is there a part six, or is there more to part five than what is on that last webpage? (Before the Ralph Waldo Emerson quote!) One of the Kelly brothers is just sitting there, conversation barely started ...& there seems to be a lot more to tell.
10:32am / Jun 5, 2008