ELEGY made me cry. It's so beautiful, Mike. Every panel tells me something new and advances the story. Moving. Touching. It is the best thing you've ever done -- yet.
Congratulations. You made a good story into a great one.
Wow. I-- I don't even know what to say. I liked having the element of surprise (a small source of pleasure for me) in presenting this important story to my close friends out of nowhere, especially those I see almost every day.
It was tough not talking about something I was excited about. I can't describe how happy I am to not only end this mammoth project (by my standards), but to end it this way as well. I'm glad you liked it, too.
I was gonna have the baby explode from Kim's stomach and have it multiply into a million different parasitical creatures that take over the world, but I figured that Dean plans on doing that same thing over at "Fear, My Dear". Ooops, did I drop a spoiler?
Ben, thank you so much for being one of the coolest muthas to roam the land. I always anticipate you stamp of awesomeness. I hope we get to clink our beer mugs one day.
You've chosen the hard way of doing this, long-form, so that your early missteps are carried forward with your later triumphs and I know that at times it's felt like a MillStone around your neck. Most of us can bury our earlier work, holding up the later more accomplished things as if we lept fully-formed from the head of Zeus. But then most of don't have such an impressive developmental work to hold up, most of us don't figure out how to make art out of our lives until much later, most of us aren't as ambitious as you and none of us could have achieved what you just have.
I could try and list all the beautiful telling detail that forwards and elaborates on your storytelling. I could list all the clever devices, the contraction and expansion of time, the meta-narrative. I could point out that it's often very well drawn, beautiful and unsettling. That's all beside the point however, it's the way it all holds together that makes it remarkable and affecting.
I love Panorama. Whatever you are cooking up next is going to set the world on fire!
For better or worse, my awkward first steps will always be attached to a bigger piece of work, the second half, which is only a little LESS awkward. Maybe one day, a complete, singular work of mine will have fairly more consistent quality.
Your fair, kind, and critical take on my work has always been highly inspiring. You know the goods when you see them and you also call out the bullshit when deemed appropriate.
I may have mentioned this to you, but one of my codas is largely based on a Gil Kane quote: "There's the Good, but there's also the Better." Whatever I do in my life, comix or otherwise, all I can hope to strive for is the Better.
I'm glad that I pulled off page 55... and that it was a nice fit. Thank you for your continuous support all throughout the years, Pat! I really did have a blast making and sharing this comic!
panorama in it's beginning was a reliable source for incredibly fun and original comix, but it 's tremendous heart, breadth and surprising ability to touch people has made more than just another comic, at least for me.
i don't think your voice has come through so clearly or poignantly in your work as it does here in this last installment. the art, the story, the sentiment are all perfection, bubba.
now, pass the nachos!
As always, your unflinching support is the truels, buks. Those are very insightful and loving words of honest criticism. I can rest easy for a while, knowing that I have satisfied your standards this little bit.
Screw Ozone. It's Turbo that had heat with Special K, sons!
Wow, I can't believe it's over, and what a way to go out. This last part was something else, I want to say they're my favorite pages of yours, but I feel like I say that with every new page. I don't even know what to say that hasn't already been said by someone else here before. This is one of my favorite comics and like most of the things I really enjoy it was really hard to see it end, i got a little teary there too, buhhoohoos, and FUCK I dunno what to say. If I could be as poetic about it as Elegy was, I suppose it wouldn't be that special? Shit... Panorama kicked my ass from start to finish. Loved it. ...Encore?
It's not whether it's been said or not, Pedro... you've always been a very cool friend and I know that your intentions are positive. From the bottom of my heart I thank you for being there through the thickness, the drunkedness, and the yippie balls.
Encore? I'm gonna vacation for the next 100 years instead!
Holy shit man, that Elegy was stupid fresh.. That is honestly some of the best comix I have read in a while. The artwork isn't just good- it's perfect. The storytelling is perfect, the dialogue and images match beautifully. Dude if you keep making comix like this it is going to be ridiculous!
This comic was like riding a roller coaster while eating sushi and watching a movie. I'll have to do it again and again to catch all the lovely little bits I missed.
High compliments coming from you, Tim... but don't try to scare me off, pal! I've already got comix coming up that will hopefully put this to shame. Or at least they'll be so different from each other that it won't matter.
the change in perspective ended the story with a dramatic, thoughtful punch that i didn't see coming. it seems to me like you used the end as way to channel your own feelings about the comic as a mix of obsession, frustration, dedication, and love. which gives the comic more depth in the longrun, a more personal and thoughtful elegance.
as i said, i didn't see that coming, but it ended things on such a graceful high note - screams loud and clear in both the artwork and storytelling.
I think you nailed it. Halfway through making the 9 page ending sequence, I realized that I was expressing my own feelings about this entire experience (aside from, ahem, personal life stuff that totally informed it).
Thank you so much, Derek! I like making comics for smart, kind, & cool people like yourself. It's my pleasure, really.
What an amazing ride. I started to read the story with Brawl and thought something like: Holy Shit - what's that? Where will that going? And it went always in another direction as I had thought. You found an end, where I thought there could be no end. Page 55 is one of the best I saw the last time.
Holy cow, that's not a two run homer. That's a Grand Slam.
The great thing about this comic is that for all the clever design, all the stunning fetishistic drawing, and for all of the inventiveness, I was always following the story first. To me, that's the best reason to make comics. Solid, solid, solid work. You make me wanna draw!
A huge learning curve, this comic was. Don't know if I passed the test, but I did learn a whole hell of a lot. The conclusion I came to was precisely what you point out: good and pure comics are, at the root of it, all about story. Not flashiness or impressive perspective or detailed rendering. Without STORY, there is nothing.
Thanks for the good heads up all throughout Panorama, Nick. You're a great teacher, friend, and comix maker.
I love your way Fiffe. My eyes were dancing to the beat of your heart which can be felt on every page. You're a beautiful man, and you made a most beautiful comic. There's so much of you in this, and that's the magic which makes it one of the greatest greats. Much love!
JOE! Your words are a constant inspiration and are sorely missed! Germany is a better place because of you. Thank you very much, my friend. Hopefully we'll get to celebrate in person sooner than later.
I don't know, part of me flirted with the idea of perpetuating these characters and their lives. X-men, this is not, though, so I'm glad to give them a solid goodbye. Who knows, though? If there's a story itching to get out, I'll find a way to make it happen.
In the meantime, I have a million other ideas that I hope will prove to be, not only as interesting as Panorama, but even better.
You've been such a cool staple in the face of online anonymity. I've fully appreciated your feedback, Kiel, and I look forward to your own work to drop like a bomb on all of us.
Fiffe,
I wanted to wait until I could start back at the beginning of Part Two and read through to the end before saying anything about this last chapter.
Somehow you've taken a work of fiction and given it the weight of reality and an emotional truth that few works of memoir or nonfiction ever achieve.
There are so many moments of comic-making perfection here, eloquent, soundless visuals, and haunting lines of dialogue.
If ACT-I-VATE has been a laboratory, PANORAMA can now safely be declared a triumphant experiment, fusing emotional reality with the subconscious truth of a dream, turned nightmare, turned waking catharsis.
Mike, these words mean more to me than you will ever know. Not only do I respect your opinion and revere your talent and appreciate your honest, non-BS attitude towards Art & Comix & people, but it's good to know that a cartoonist of your caliber is cool enough to mingle with the likes of me.
I can only hope to offer you one day the same kind of help and support you have shown me since we met. For now, all I can do is try to show up at the studio more often and try to fight off the cruel boredom imps with a stick. And maybe some ping pong. Maybe a joke or two... for a change.
Michel, I have nothing new to add to what's been said, since I agree with everyone: the story was paramount, the art went from skilled and imaginative to masterful, the emotional content became more and more resonant. This is a fine, fine piece of work, and very unique. I sincerely hope this finds the right venue for print publication, that can do it justice and give you the recognition and celebration you deserve. Thanks for sharing.
well, this second part reads a little bit different, but better and faster.The end feels a little melancholic -a thing i couldn't predict by the main story,because it differs from the rest of it-. All in all, it's a very well done "pshycadelical romance".
good work
12:07pm / Jul 10, 2008