I need to see the book (consider this a preorder). all laid out, cover to cover, so I can backtrack and get all the layers of your story. I'm so going back to the beginning here, to appreciate what you're up to. I love the intensity of this story--like Faulkner and Conrad, so many fraught relationships that add up to the truth of a time and a place.
Got to this just now... it's fantastic! These pages totally work and are nicely, briskly drawn. Advancing story, character and memory into 2 beautiful pages... I'd pay for this!
11:37pm / Mar 6, 2009