I'm not sure that word ballons are helping this story- seems to me you're really good at letting the story "speak for it's self (if that means anything)- maybe you don't want to create a modern "illustrated novel without words"- but I think you're good enuff to pull one off if you want (think Eric D,'s "Flood"- but wait- that one had a couple of words also- DAMN !!!)
10:30am / Aug 7, 2008