Your panel arrangements are so great, and the color is so casual and different. But what's happening--is this the cactus? What the hell IS this? You, by the way, are the king of what the hell IS this...
While I must protest your sudden departure from a bit of humpy-humpy I admit you could not have made a more interesting diversion. More humpy-humpy, please.
This is the finest page of the bunch. I don't want to make too much of the formal aspects, but this is by far the most "readable" page so far. I think the panels filling the width of the page really helps. Also the silhouettes against that full background really makes it easy to dive into the image.
what the...? That thing looks awesome? Is it me or does it have like...a nipple...?? Love the designs for both the world and the character outfits...and how you're coloring these. ARGH! Can't wait to see what "not THAT" is.
Wow, thank you so much! Without overdoing it, I do want every bit of this comic to mean something, however small. I also wouldn't want all these details to distract from the reading, instead of enhancing it. Your kind words make me feel as if though I'm going in the right direction. Many thanks!
08:32am / Oct 21, 2009